brisbane   10 #1 Posted January 14, 2007 A short tale to be told.  My first offering of 2007, hope you enjoy. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...
shoeshine   10 #2 Posted January 14, 2007 You wicked, wicked writer you! :hihi:  Loved it! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...
brisbane   10 #3 Posted January 14, 2007 Thank you, you have made me blush. I thought it might be a bit too short, but glad you liked it!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...
Mantaspook   14 #4 Posted January 14, 2007 A short and sweet story Brisbane.  The main characters seemed very rounded but were a bit too alike, if there were a little more variety I’m sure the story would be a revel..ation.  Good stuff. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...
brisbane   10 #5 Posted January 14, 2007 :hihi: Revels were never the same when they took the peanuts out. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...
pattricia   579 #6 Posted January 14, 2007 Brisbane, thats a lovely story.Short & sweet. ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...
coyleys   10 #7 Posted January 14, 2007 Nice one. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...
brisbane   10 #8 Posted January 14, 2007 Thanks everyone! It was based on a true story and I have the empty box to prove it! :hihi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...