Appolo Posted February 2, 2006 Share Posted February 2, 2006 Appolo thats lovely thanks iv'e got tears in my eyes & a lump in my throat & i don't half miss her & i'm not ashamed to admit it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sheffco Posted February 2, 2006 Share Posted February 2, 2006 To okayitsme Love your poem - - look at it from a male point of view. female visciousness and violence does exist, and hurts terribly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
livestrong Posted February 3, 2006 Share Posted February 3, 2006 the sands of time the sands of time with the dawn of the world came the rising of the sun for the very first time, as she took to the skies rising inch by inch her soft glow touched the new born earth, the seas began to shimmer in the light as the waves softly rose and fell, the mountains thundered from the oceans casting dispersions through the surf. then there was calm as every corner of the world embraced the dawning of new life, the eternal hour glass had at last been turned as the sands of time began to flow, each one carefully biding its time not to idle by or be rushed along its way, it had already been written that when life was ready our spirit would start to grow. the sands of time will flow throughout the journey through our lives, never to be prevented from completing their solitary thankless task, they will forever guide us as we search for all that is pure in our lives, ensuring we remember that life, our fate, will come and find us is all they ask. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
koenigsinger Posted February 3, 2006 Share Posted February 3, 2006 A lyric rather than a poem, just wanted to share it..... Emerald. You dress my love in emerald hue in velvet wrapped preserved for you placed on display with pinned down wings this butterfly screams to be free. You are Franciscan to your soul no living thing can come to harm. Fear, only fear imprisons me we cannot face the world alone broken by our shared morality your heart is black my soul is gone. Shaun (2005) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beamer Posted February 3, 2006 Share Posted February 3, 2006 Goodbye Mother Mother you did the best you could for me now enjoy your eternal sleep Now i know man's not supposed to cry but all i seem to do is weep You were the best there is no doubt you loved and nurtured me You gave me birth and slaved and toiled now rest eternally A mothers love is the finest thing all these words are true So thank you mum for all you did and Mother i love you oh god,tears are streaming down my face,that poems is fantastic....really touches the heart:cry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GothicCharm Posted February 4, 2006 Share Posted February 4, 2006 It's not very good but I like it. It's basically about vanity and selfishness She takes deep breaths As she clearly sees The sight of herself Drowing in the sea Her spirit jumps in takes her by the waist Brings her to the surface And caresses that lovely face She lays on the beach Spluttering and coughing A man walks past And looks through her like shes nothing. She treated him bad In her life of self Now he doesnt care She's not really there She killed her own spirit Never realising She saved her own life And she will survive She's out of her sea of self The vanity which ran her life Has gone, vanished, Died. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eleri Posted February 4, 2006 Share Posted February 4, 2006 This is a poem my partner sent to me, via IM no less soon after we started seeing each other. It was the first poem someone ever wrote just for me, and I've only ever shared it with close friends before, so I hope he doesn't kill me for this Do you know from our first kiss I knew, My fate was sealed, my heart was sold to your heart, For just one kiss. Do you know you captured me with a smile, Within a flash of your eyes, It is so easy to become lost, mesmerised by a smile Do, you know that when I hold you my spirit soars, And at that moment, I find peace, an incredible silence Which only the beatings of our hearts share. Do you know what I am saying is I love you, That I live for just a moment more with you, And spend my days waiting... For just one kiss. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leigh Posted February 4, 2006 Share Posted February 4, 2006 Whether this constitutes a poem, I don't know. But it does sum me up at the moment. Want all the luxuries in life, but am unwilling to work for them. Perhaps it's a poem in the making. Big house, fast car, sharp suit, quids in. Indolent, apathetic, inattentive, violin…. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mandy25 Posted February 4, 2006 Share Posted February 4, 2006 This poem is called "A Little girl" A little girl tries to hide But can't escape the pain inside Another beating comes with the morning light Have you any idea what you've done? Was it all just twisted fun? That little girl is a woman now She'll find her way somehow But the little girl is all you ever see I know because that little girl was me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucretia_73 Posted February 4, 2006 Share Posted February 4, 2006 Reading this thread inspired me to dig out my book of poems from a very emotional period of my life and have a flick through. I've got loads of heartfelt whining in there...thankfully I got a grip and have since banished most emotion relating to other people from my life and become cruel, cold and heartless according to my ex...maybe I should get him to read the poems from the late 90's and he'd understand why! Promises You said forever, but forever isn't long these days You pledged eternal love, eternity expired last week You made promises you couldn't keep, no one could keep You should have kept your mouth shut, you should have kept your peace Don't tell me that you care, I don't believe you anymore Don't even try to break into my solitude Don't come around expecting me to be your whore I'm tired of being used You swore faithful, how many others did you say that to? You mentioned marriage, but institutions never suited you The things you wrote, you thought you meant, they didn't mean a thing You should have kept your mouth shut, I'd have settled for a fling You made me cry, you made me scream, You made me ache, you made me leave Now I'm not coming back to you, 'Cos I have learned a thing or two, Love does not have to equal pain And you won't break my heart again. With Love I don't believe a word you say, you talk all night and through the day Never letting truth get in the way, of your rhetoric Those naive can't understand, your attention is in demand, Others try to take your hand, I give it Always someone there to fool, children playing by your rule Shouldn't they be back at school? Shouldn't you? I was too wise to your tricks, your beguilments fell to bits Shattered dreams I could not fix, with love. Bitter? Moi?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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