Help me find out what's wrong with my CV. Please!

[limpetboy 10]

Hello

 

I need your help, Sheffield Forum.

 

I've just written my CV and I would like some opinions on it. What I would like is some feedback on format, presentation and anything that just plain sounds rubbish (and ideally what you think I could to improve it).

 

If you are willing to help me in this, send me a PM with your email address (or post it here if you don't mind half of Sheffield adding you to MSN!) and I will send you a copy of my CV.

 

It is a Word 2003 document so if you need it/prefer it in another format (earlier Word, ascii or pdf) let me know and I'll see what I can do.

 

I can't offer you anything in the way of compensation beyond the warm fuzzy feeling you will get from helping a man get a job in Newcastle so he can be with his girlfriend.

 

Thank you SF in advance for your help, my gratitude will be eternally yours.

[limpetboy 10]

CGK1000 has just pointed out it may be a good idea to say what kind of job I'm looking for. Good thinking.

 

Well I'm a Project Manager/Co-ordinator at the moment and am looking for a similar type of job. No real preference as to industry but I currently work in IT.

 

Sean

[weenireeni 10]

Hi I currently work at a recruitment agency so might be able to offer tips, and boyf works in IT so can look at atechnical side! email to [email protected]

[limpetboy 10]

Originally posted by weenireeni

Hi I currently work at a recruitment agency so might be able to offer tips, and boyf works in IT so can look at atechnical side! email to [email protected]

 

Thanks Weenireeni! Just emailed to you.

[weenireeni 10]

hi limpetboy, still not received your email if you do need help still....??

[limpetboy 10]

Originally posted by weenireeni

hi limpetboy, still not received your email if you do need help still....??

 

How odd, I've tried again...