Story: 'Chess 2'

[mikomi 10]

This is only a draft ,but i would like to know if it makes sense at all .

 

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Edited March 19, 2010 by mikomi
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[scribe 10]

Mikomi .

I suspect this is going to spring a surprise or two . I'm lost with the chess bit but i never understood the game anyway ,but for those that do they''l be playing it out bit by bit and no-doubt waiting for the next installment.

[coyleys 10]

Yep! it makes sense, keep em coming.

[Hopman 46]

One criticism regarding the squares: iy would be a4 not 4a.

[pattricia 575]

This is a clever piece of writing.

[mikomi 10]

One criticism regarding the squares: iy would be a4 not 4a.

 

I just knew sooner or later someone in this group would have a good knowledge of chess thanks Hopman .

 

Like scribe i don't have a clue about the game .As I'm plotting the story

i am also reading a book on chess trying to fathom it all out and put it into place, so to all of you out there who know about the game please bear with me a feel free to correct any error i may make .

[pattricia 575]

I just knew sooner or later someone in this group would have a good knowledge of chess thanks Hopman .

 

Like scribe i don't have a clue about the game .As I'm plotting the story

i am also reading a book on chess trying to fathom it all out and put it into place, so to all of you out there who know about the game please bear with me a feel free to correct any error i may make .

 

Just shows that hes read your story very carefully,mikomi !!