threecolours Posted December 3, 2006 Share Posted December 3, 2006 Over the hill. I don't intend to post stuff quite this quickly again but if I don't do it now I never will! I'd love to have patience and skill to write longer things but this is all I can normally manage. As before - praise, criticism, fear or loathing welcome thanks... I'm off to read some of the great words on here already. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redbee Posted December 4, 2006 Share Posted December 4, 2006 hi, just read your story.what do you mean by "Childhood is when parents give adults their memories"..it sounds nice i have an understanding for that.but what you had in mind? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pattricia Posted December 4, 2006 Share Posted December 4, 2006 I enjoyed this..Hope you write some more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shoeshine Posted December 5, 2006 Share Posted December 5, 2006 I like your writing style, and the sense of acute observation of the characters within the piece. It's an ideal example of how to portray deep thoughts concisely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
threecolours Posted December 5, 2006 Author Share Posted December 5, 2006 hi, just read your story.what do you mean by "Childhood is when parents give adults their memories"..it sounds nice i have an understanding for that.but what you had in mind? Hmm...I wasn't sure it made sense! I kinda meant something that when people are adults they have memories of their childhood given to them by their parents. Trying to just say that parents should (as most do thankfully!) remember that the smallest and biggest things they do can be remembered by children and taken with them into adulthood. I wonder if that's what you thought I meant or you had better ideas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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