Story: 'The Carpet Monsters.' ( a new begining )

[mikomi 10]

Sorry it's long , i got carried away again.

 

"LINK DELETED BY AUTHOR.")(A new beginning)

Edited March 19, 2010 by mikomi
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[shoeshine 10]

I am sure we can manage to read more than two pages in succession mikomi.

 

Especially on this Group!

[Gypsy Hack 10]

Nice idea, some good little touches like the carpet mites being fed to the millibugs. I could see it working with more segregated scenes, concentrating on the two main characters but also on the rest of the monsters as they feel out their surroundings. Interesting mind you got there

[shoeshine 10]

mikomi.......I loved it!

 

Your imagination is quite staggering.