GothicCharm Posted September 16, 2006 Share Posted September 16, 2006 I'm going to warn you, it's a bit crap. Heartbeat I lay in the dark Staring up to the roof I hear the steady beat Of my heart, all alone. I'm safe when I'm with him Curled up in his arms Listening to his heartbeat Rejoice for the stars. But now I'm alone Curled up in a ball Hearing my own heartbeat Alone through it all. He'll be in my nightmares He'll be in my dreams He'll be in my heartbeat He'll hear all my screams Protecting me from evil I love him so much You may ask me why, or how do I know But the reason is in this poem Craving his gentle touch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pattricia Posted September 16, 2006 Share Posted September 16, 2006 I think the quality is superb.I could never write poetry.Its lovely.Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mikomi Posted September 16, 2006 Share Posted September 16, 2006 So where is it? .The crap bit i mean, it's a lovely piece of work . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jabberwocky Posted September 16, 2006 Share Posted September 16, 2006 Nothing wrong with that at all. Its making me revise my opinions on lyrics and poetry is this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GothicCharm Posted September 16, 2006 Author Share Posted September 16, 2006 thanks everyone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shoeshine Posted September 16, 2006 Share Posted September 16, 2006 I've already PM'd you with info GC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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