hazel   11 #1 Posted July 30, 2006 Sparetime stories  This is something I do in my sparetime. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...
pattricia   575 #2 Posted July 30, 2006 Hazel, I find your writing fascinating.Maybe,because im a woman.I think Ive had troubles in my life ,but nothing compared to you.Keep it up. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...
shoeshine   10 #3 Posted July 30, 2006 hazel, your link works perfectly.......  I have edited this post to remove the work from the "open" part of the Writing Group, but have retained the link to your work.  Please, in future, do not place your work directly onto this "open" part of the Writing Group.  The link to your work will be quite sufficient, perhaps with your own introduction to it......have a look at the other Threads for guidance if necessary.   Many thanks Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...
hazel   11 #4 Posted July 30, 2006 Thanks shoeshne I can't seem to manage without your help I didn't think I got it right, but I tried very hard, Thanks Pattricia, I did think it might be a touch feminine for the males. section.  hazel. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...
pattricia   575 #5 Posted July 30, 2006 Thanks shoeshne I can't seem to manage without your help I didn't think I got it right, but I tried very hard, Thanks Pattricia, I did think it might be a touch feminine for the males. section.  hazel. Shoeshine,what would we do without him ? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...
hazel   11 #6 Posted August 1, 2006 Sparetime stories  second chapter, (hopefuly) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...
sauerkraut   10 #7 Posted August 1, 2006 Yes, it's there - thank goodness, as I was already awaiting part 2 with bated breath. There was only one page though and I want more. Please! When you've time.  I love the brave, matter-of-fact way you write about the situation. The suffering is very evidently there, but somehow hidden under the surface (under an almost stoical exterior?), which I can imagine is a fair reflection of how it was at the time.  I could see it being made into a play.  I hope writing it all down is helping you deal with the demons, and I look forward to reading more soon. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...
hazel   11 #8 Posted August 1, 2006 Thanks sauerkraut,  It's good to get replies as then I know some Formers want me to go on, it's a bit difficult if no feedback. Thanks again  hazel Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...
shoeshine   10 #9 Posted August 1, 2006 hazel, I have not had time to read your contributions yet.  I will do so as soon as possible and comment.  sauerkraut's post above has me intrigued. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...
hazel   11 #10 Posted August 3, 2006 Part three.  Sparetime stories Part 3. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...
pattricia   575 #11 Posted August 3, 2006 Hazel, I read your sparetime story part 3. This has to be real life to write like this. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...
hazel   11 #12 Posted August 4, 2006 Have pm'ed you pattricia. Thanks for feedback  hazel Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...