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Story: Sparetime stories - Parts 1 to 3

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Hazel, I find your writing fascinating.Maybe,because im a woman.I think Ive had troubles in my life ,but nothing compared to you.Keep it up.

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hazel, your link works perfectly.......

 

I have edited this post to remove the work from the "open" part of the Writing Group, but have retained the link to your work.

 

Please, in future, do not place your work directly onto this "open" part of the Writing Group.

 

The link to your work will be quite sufficient, perhaps with your own introduction to it......have a look at the other Threads for guidance if necessary.

 

 

Many thanks

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Thanks shoeshne I can't seem to manage without your help

I didn't think I got it right, but I tried very hard,

Thanks Pattricia, I did think it might be a touch feminine for the males. section.

 

hazel.

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Thanks shoeshne I can't seem to manage without your help

I didn't think I got it right, but I tried very hard,

Thanks Pattricia, I did think it might be a touch feminine for the males. section.

 

hazel.

Shoeshine,what would we do without him ? :thumbsup:

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Yes, it's there - thank goodness, as I was already awaiting part 2 with bated breath. There was only one page though and I want more. Please! When you've time. ;)

 

I love the brave, matter-of-fact way you write about the situation. The suffering is very evidently there, but somehow hidden under the surface (under an almost stoical exterior?), which I can imagine is a fair reflection of how it was at the time.

 

I could see it being made into a play.

 

I hope writing it all down is helping you deal with the demons, and I look forward to reading more soon.

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Thanks sauerkraut,

 

It's good to get replies as then I know some Formers want me to go on, it's a bit difficult if no feedback.

Thanks again

 

hazel

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hazel, I have not had time to read your contributions yet.

 

I will do so as soon as possible and comment.

 

sauerkraut's post above has me intrigued. :)

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Hazel, I read your sparetime story part 3. This has to be real life to write like this.

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Have pm'ed you pattricia. Thanks for feedback

 

hazel

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