Younger kids 10-14 yrs? on building site sheff5

[beemerchez 10]

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Edited March 3, 2018 by beemerchez

[gluedtopc 10]

That doesn't rhyme!!

[No User Name 10]

That doesn't rhyme!!

 

Poems dont have to. It's a good effort but I dont think Carol Ann Duffy has anything to worry about though.

[tzijlstra 11]

I used to love playing on building sites, so it isn't just 'kids today' I am sure.

 

In fact one of my uncles told me a story about him and a friend being caught on a site by police, they had started the cement mill and put lots of soil, plants, tools and so on into the mixer. They got a proper telling off. This was in '69 I might add.

[Carmen. 14]

Where is the ''poem'' in this?

[No User Name 10]

Where is the ''poem'' in this?

 

The opening post has the structure of one with all the needless line breaks etc...

[L00b 441]

before one gets seriously hurt

What, and hinder the running for this year's Darwin Awards? Can't have that

 

Let the kids be stupid, the services pick the bits, and the parents unsuccessfully try and get compo.

[geared 314]

Kids running rampant in S5???

 

Whatever next??