Watt pad Lolz0202

[19kirsty 10]

my 12yr old daughter Lauren is a young talented writer if u got watt pad plz read n comment with kind regards thank you

[SYorksDeano 10]

What am I reading exactly?

[Spyrizzle 10]

Never head of Wattpad before, but just Googled it. Seems a decent idea, I'll check it out.

 

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What am I reading exactly?

http://www.wattpad.com/user/Lolz0202

[19kirsty 10]

What am I reading exactly?

 

its my daughters story's what she's done she's 12yrs and think its rather good

 

---------- Post added 26-05-2014 at 20:02 ----------

 

I didn't Lauren found it and doing her own story's

[dhs1 10]

She's clearly got a very supportive mother.

[19kirsty 10]

thank you its something she loves and wants some advice about writing her own story's x

[dhs1 10]

What have her English teachers said? Are you encouraging her to read a wide range of authors?

[Spyrizzle 10]

I didn't read the rest because they're not my cup of tea, but I read the Hunger Games one. I thought it was really good. Could possibly look at improving on structure, grammar and some spellings, but I'm not the best writer in the world myself, so it's hard to critique. I'd definitely encourage her to continue. She's certainly got a talent.

[19kirsty 10]

yes so far so good they behind her 100℅ she's only truly happy when she's reading or writing x

 

---------- Post added 26-05-2014 at 20:26 ----------

 

thank you spyrizzle for your kind words it really means alot x

[mikomi 10]

Not short on imagination for a twelve year old granted .

 

The only thing i would say, and it's not being picky but why write. ( i met 5 boys and 4 girls ) when ( I met five boys and four girls ) much better i think .