.. Come Fut Day .. ( jb)

[johnsbucket 10]

Some come on coaches some come in car,

Some travel short distance some travel far.

This seaside town they come for their trips,

A walk on the beach and eat fish n chips.

Amusement arcade some will go,

Sit for ages playing prize bingo.

Some will spend time on the peer fishing,

Lots will lie on the beach just quietly wishing.

Ice cream being sold like it’s going out of fashion,

Others book hotels for the odd night of passion.

Occasional boat trips going out to sea,

Find nice cafe have a nice cup of tea.

You might come just to soak up the rays

Or like most just come fut day.

To smell sea air, the bit I like most,

There’s nothing quite like a trip to the coast

 

Johnsbucket (summer 2013)

[Gone4good 10]

Of all the verses that formed in your brain

I think this one is, by far, most inane

I'd give it a rest, or at least tone it down

Your doggerel would even make Ogden Nash frown.

[johnsbucket 10]

Never mind any comments it is a free society and people can say what they wish as put in previous post most are utter tosh but over 3000 people have read my post in the past 10 days. Which totally suprises me and I know not had many comments but people keep reading them.

Edited December 19, 2013 by johnsbucket
removal of word

[Gone4good 10]

Johnsbucket declared that this world is free

So he's spamming the board to the highest degree

He's ignoring the saying that less can be more

and equating the views with a quality score

The bad news is, Sir, as I'm sure you do know it

Rhyming two words doesn't make you a poet

[johnsbucket 10]

quite agree but never ever claimed to be one.

[Gone4good 10]

It does seem a little bit strange and absurd

If your verses are tosh (to use your own word)

That you still fill the board from the top to the toe

With missives that, frankly, we'd rather not know

If excellent poetry isn't your goal

One can only assume that you must be a troll

More likely the truth is your modesty's fake

Or you'd never consider the posts that you make

I applaud your devotion to making your rhymes

But, moderation is often the best at these times

[johnsbucket 10]

Dear Sir I first must show huge respect,the use of your words shows great interlect,here is an area where I know that Im beat,and wave a white flag in humble defeat,and I know your right as my rhymes are really no good,so as from now Im gone for good.