Feedback on my website please.

[MNH786 10]

Hi

 

currently you have a web presence not a website.

 

If you have a shop on the high street it's - location, location, location.

 

A website that will work for you needs - content, content content!

 

Google - who have over 85% of the browser market will only rank you above others if you give the market you are after what they want to read and see in unique content.

 

All the others who have posted here have been helpful on the visual side so I have had a look at you page source.

 

Your pages needs unique content - 300 words minimum with pictures.

 

Your Title - Should have your keyword(s) in it long tailed or short.

 

You need to reinforce it in your meta description - up to 90 words.

 

your meta keywords should be no more than 4 or 5.

 

Make sure your keyword(s) are in your body copy first in your H1 title and then in the first sentence of content and then repeat them every 100 + words. I tend to put one in my 1st sentence repeat it in the middle and on at the end in the text line back to the home page on a 300 to 350 word page.

 

Your images should have a filled in title=" " in the html

 

Make sure your other pages have a text link with the keyword(s) in it back to your home/index page.

 

Think in terms of 30 pages minimum not five!

 

Sorry to have gone on a bit but I do want you to make it work for you.

 

Hope I have helped.

 

will do that thanks.

[RootsBooster 24]

I like the washing machines. Maybe you need a few more though.

[TheBlueDragon 10]

What I'd suggest us using the HTML Validator, I use it for all my websites as it helps clear up your code

 

http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.a2zsheffield.co.uk%2F&charset=%28detect+automatically%29&doctype=Inline&group=0&user-agent=W3C_Validator%2F1.3

[roofcoatings 10]

Opening hours would be helpful, the Facebook link should be clickable.

 

Good luck.

[MNH786 10]

Opening hours would be helpful, the Facebook link should be clickable.

 

Good luck.

 

done. thanks

[Bruno 10]

Te letter A on your logo doesn't look quite right, needs to be a fraction bigger.

[TheBlueDragon 10]

Are you getting paid for this website or it is just a favour?

[MNH786 10]

Are you getting paid for this website or it is just a favour?

 

just a favour. why

[TheBlueDragon 10]

If their happy with it then I wouldnt care about what others think lol

[MNH786 10]

If their happy with it then I wouldnt care about what others think lol

 

lol they happy with it.. but i will learn from it by making these changes etc.

[FACEBOOK 10]

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Edited January 14, 2013 by FACEBOOK