Feedback on my website please.

[Bruno 10]

The scrolling text I'd remove a bit hurtful to the eyes

[stereolab 10]

The scrolling text I'd remove a bit hurtful to the eyes

 

Definitely remove the scrolling text - its not 1996!

[SpeedwayDan 10]

It's not bad if it's your first attempt.

 

I agree on losing the scrolling text, it's not needed.

 

Get more content on there as already suggested, especially on your home page.

 

Well done on using Notepad++ though, you will learn alot more doing it all yourself rather than using things like Serif Webplus.

[MNH786 10]

thanks every one for feedbacks made some changes can you please have a look.. will remove scrolling text this weekend as busy with college work.

[walkertelecoms 16]

As said above, the text.

You could think about importing some FLASH instead of the text, and have various images rolling through that (assuming you can do that with Notepad++ you can do this with Dreamweaver, easy to learn, I did and I'm a dinosaur )

[a wasp 10]

Whoops!

 

It needs a lot of work.

The photos are mostly terrible -- badly lit and out of focus. The wall of phone accessories pic on the home page made me laugh out loud -- the center of attention is an office chair and a spray bottle of cleaning fluid. The busted iPhone photo has a blob of brown (a wooden surface??) at the bottom right because it wasn't cut out properly. You could have solved that by simply placing the phone on matt white card stock and lighting it correctly.

 

That pic with the selection of Blackberry phones looks suspiciously like it came from the manufacturers site. Probably heavily copyrighted too.

 

You have up to five wildly different typefaces in some pages. Settle for a single clean san-serif and use no more than three different weights throughout. Whatever you do, please get rid of the Comic Sans typeface. It's a site for a business, not an invitation to a child's birthday party.

[TheBlueDragon 10]

I don't know if its just my laptop but below the scroller I can see a single think vertical red line directly in the middle. Also as said the main page could do with some text. Also I'm not keen on the counter as I believe is shows how little traffic the site is getting. Finally because of the size of the images is makes some of the pages wider than others and the about us and contact us pages have a different font to the rest (I may just be been picky lol)

 

Other than that it has nice simple navigation and clear text.

[Marx 10]

I think 'a wasp' sums it up well. I hadn't noticed the spray bottle before. Ask yourself, "Does this site instill conficence in people to buy from me?"

[MailBottle 11]

Hi

 

currently you have a web presence not a website.

 

If you have a shop on the high street it's - location, location, location.

 

A website that will work for you needs - content, content content!

 

Google - who have over 85% of the browser market will only rank you above others if you give the market you are after what they want to read and see in unique content.

 

All the others who have posted here have been helpful on the visual side so I have had a look at you page source.

 

Your pages needs unique content - 300 words minimum with pictures.

 

Your Title - Should have your keyword(s) in it long tailed or short.

 

You need to reinforce it in your meta description - up to 90 words.

 

your meta keywords should be no more than 4 or 5.

 

Make sure your keyword(s) are in your body copy first in your H1 title and then in the first sentence of content and then repeat them every 100 + words. I tend to put one in my 1st sentence repeat it in the middle and on at the end in the text line back to the home page on a 300 to 350 word page.

 

Your images should have a filled in title=" " in the html

 

Make sure your other pages have a text link with the keyword(s) in it back to your home/index page.

 

Think in terms of 30 pages minimum not five!

 

Sorry to have gone on a bit but I do want you to make it work for you.

 

Hope I have helped.

[MNH786 10]

I think 'a wasp' sums it up well. I hadn't noticed the spray bottle before. Ask yourself, "Does this site instill conficence in people to buy from me?"

pic with spray bottle wasnt they inseted it on mouse over just to check how it works on friday i think.

[MNH786 10]

Whoops!

 

It needs a lot of work.

The photos are mostly terrible -- badly lit and out of focus. The wall of phone accessories pic on the home page made me laugh out loud -- the center of attention is an office chair and a spray bottle of cleaning fluid. The busted iPhone photo has a blob of brown (a wooden surface??) at the bottom right because it wasn't cut out properly. You could have solved that by simply placing the phone on matt white card stock and lighting it correctly.

 

That pic with the selection of Blackberry phones looks suspiciously like it came from the manufacturers site. Probably heavily copyrighted too.

 

You have up to five wildly different typefaces in some pages. Settle for a single clean san-serif and use no more than three different weights throughout. Whatever you do, please get rid of the Comic Sans typeface. It's a site for a business, not an invitation to a child's birthday party.

 

it does need alot of work but im still learning. inserted that wall of phone accessoris pic on friday as did had any in my computer wanted to check how mouse over thing works will put another 1 on its place and yes the pictures are crap as im abit too lazy to take new ones lol. i will change font to calabri in about 30min. thanks for feedback .

[MNH786 10]

I don't know if its just my laptop but below the scroller I can see a single think vertical red line directly in the middle. Also as said the main page could do with some text. Also I'm not keen on the counter as I believe is shows how little traffic the site is getting. Finally because of the size of the images is makes some of the pages wider than others and the about us and contact us pages have a different font to the rest (I may just be been picky lol)

 

Other than that it has nice simple navigation and clear text.

its fine on my laptop. and i will insert some text but dont no what to write lol. inserted counter 2 days ago to check howmuch traffic im getting thats why its at the bottom of the page will remove it soon, will change ths font size and pictures hopefully today.

thanks for your feedback..