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I've just about finished an attempt at my first book.

I'm now debating in my head about trying the ebook thing, the ins and outs of self publishing etc etc.

I'm really after someone to have a look through what i've done and decide if I need to employ an Editor or not. I know I'll need a proof reader.

There is a Sheffield element to my book btw.

 

Please look at this and if it stimulates you to help then please get in touch

 

please search, deathofaregular.com

 

Many thanks

Gary Peacock

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I've just about finished an attempt at my first book.

I'm now debating in my head about trying the ebook thing, the ins and outs of self publishing etc etc.

I'm really after someone to have a look through what i've done and decide if I need to employ an Editor or not. I know I'll need a proof reader.

There is a Sheffield element to my book btw.

 

Please look at this and if it stimulates you to help then please get in touch

 

please search, deathofaregular.com

 

Many thanks

Gary Peacock

 

Hi Gary,

I read a couple of the extracts.

It looks as though you are producing a very amusing anecdotal book.

Perhaps you could add some more words to give the readers more of a feel for the atmosphere of the pubs, the smells, the sounds, the decor etc and be more descriptive of what the characters look like

Then again you probably already have done so elsewhere in the book

I would also reformat the extracts by clicking 'justify' to align the text on the right hand side of the page.

 

Best Regards

Keith

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