A poem by my son (A tear of heroin)

[silent angel 10]

A tear of heroin

 

Shed a tear an fall to your knees

put your hands together an beg for please

Its time to face all your enemies

 

The biggest one is under your thumb

Its the reason you feel so glum

Its the reason you stole from your mum

Its the reason your all on your jack

those hands of time carnt tik back

 

I have all the wright words in the back of my mind

headz a blank carnt unwind

Take a puff then the words appear smoky in front of ma face

theres no one here they have been tacken by the empty space

Shed a tear an realize that your lost

there is no way back from this road you just crossed

see its an injection of hate your own self infliction but to late

copyright 2010

tie up Ur arm an push the pulse hard

drive in the dirty needle with no regard

 

pull the cord tyt feel Ur arm popping

as poison flushes Ur veins Ur heart near stopping

A key point in life the blade pressed against your pulse

wants your life

think about your kids your family your wife

nothing is worth this thought in your mind

if you carnt get over the wall

then a ladder you must find

climb climb climb to the sunny other side

its a mental battle its a ghost ride

 

take a deep breath as your now a proud man

you have given it everything all you can

i have it back that possibility glow

i have taken the darkness out of my rainbow

 

Writern by

 

simon

[doom bringer 10]

prison poems

 

theres loads of those and others

 

http://www.familyfriendpoems.com/family/prison-poems.asp

[silent angel 10]

so is it not a good one ?

[rubydazzler 11]

so is it not a good one ?

Is this poem actually written by your son?

 

I'm not quite sure what doombringer's comment means? Is he saying that this poem is copied from the site he's linked too?

 

I think it gives someone like me with no experience of it, an insight into the world of an addict and a glimmering of what it must be like to be enslaved by a drug.

 

All writing is cathartic, so it probably helped him as well?

[silent angel 10]

Is this poem actually written by your son?

 

I'm not quite sure what doombringer's comment means? Is he saying that this poem is copied from the site he's linked too?

 

I think it gives someone like me with no experience of it, an insight into the world of an addict and a glimmering of what it must be like to be enslaved by a drug.

 

All writing is cathartic, so it probably helped him as well?

 

yes he's thought it all up by himself the things

he comes out with is unbelievable he's not copied it

if that's doombringer means i don't think he even

knew about jail poetry he calls it urban poetry

i just think he's got real talent

[Geza 10]

Powerful stuff.

 

I agree, Silent Angel, I think your son has real talent too.

[pattricia 575]

Powerful stuff.

 

I agree, Silent Angel, I think your son has real talent too.

 

Put it to rap music and youve got a great song. Rap music has rhythm . Here is a struggling songwriter waiting to get out.

Edited March 6, 2011 by pattricia

[silent angel 10]

Put it to rap music and youve got a great song. Rap music has rhythm . Here is a struggling songwriter waiting to get out.

 

he went to a event last night i carnt remember the name

& there was someone there who is intreasted in him they have got

a record contract he told me thair names & like a pillock i can not

remember there names apparentley they are well known

people was realy intreasted in him i think its onley a matter of time

for him so watch this space will keep you updated

[fabcakes 10]

good luck to your son silent angel