Which synopsis would make you want to read this book most?

Hi there

I'm a self-publisher (non-fiction) who has just published a new book about work and organisations.

I've written three different synopses and I'm having difficulty deciding which one is most appealing to the casual browser.

I'm stuck and I have no choice but to ask you lovely people.

The links are below. I'd be extremely grateful if you could have a read and, if you manage to stay awake through all three, please let me know which you found the least dull!

1. http://www.fairday.co.uk/books/making-light-work-triptych-synopsis

2. http://www.fairday.co.uk/books/Making-Light-Work-Business

3. http://www.fairday.co.uk/books/making-light-work-by-peter-johnson

And hey, if it becomes a bestseller (doubtful) you can bask in the pride that you contributed to its success.

Very many thanks people!

Peter

From number 2:

"Making Light Work: Rethinking the service organisation is our maiden excursion into book publishing, and it is an attempt to create just such a prism. - "

Try:

Making Light Work: Rethinking the service organisation creates just such a prism. - "

Be confident!

Number 1 is a broken link

http://www.fairday.co.uk/books/making-light-work-triptych-synopsis

I think I prefer number 3.

Hi

It depends on who your target market.

If it's management and/or business students then maybe 2 is better suited. If this is an interesting book for the lay person to read then 3 is more appropriate.

I also couldn't read No 1.

Hope this helps.

Hi chaps,

Thanks awfully for taking the time to feedback! I really appreciate the comments

I've fixed the link to number 1 (sorry about that).

Be interesting to know what you think of that one.

Very many thanks

Peter