Bufferdude49 Â Â 10 #1 Posted October 28, 2014 (edited) closed poem down Edited October 31, 2014 by Bufferdude49 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...
Alan Ladd   10 #2 Posted October 28, 2014 In these days where paranoia rules those who over react are fools tales of bomb gun and knife are overblown so get a life.  Go to the park and smell the flowers don't watch the news for hours and hours for if you do they will make you sorry and you'll feel like jumping under a lorry. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...
Bufferdude49 Â Â 10 #3 Posted October 28, 2014 In these days where paranoia rules those who over react are fools tales of bomb gun and knife are overblown so get a life. Â Go to the park and smell the flowers don't watch the news for hours and hours for if you do they will make you sorry and you'll feel like jumping under a lorry. Â Paranoia perhaps but the media tends to ramp it up and we all get the impression that these gun crime incidents are the norm. I liked your poem but didn't quite understand why you reflected on it by writing one of your own, Poetry is meant not to necessarily send a message but to engage the reader to understand the meaning of what is written, sometimes we tend to deal with cold hard facts like a forensic would do with the body of a deceased. I hope you liked it from a poetry perspective even if the message contained with it might have sounded a bit paranoid as you put it? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites Share this content via...