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Old 29-09-2008, 12:35   #1
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Lots of gripping action and drama enfolding, enjoy! OK I know wrestling's not to everyone's taste, but enjoy it as a story instead of moaning about the subject matter please.
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Old 01-10-2008, 21:20   #2
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The thing is Rich stories about a wrestling tournaments aren't that exciting.I read a bit but found it lacking any credibility a bit like wrestling you know its all a fix before the fight begins.
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Old 01-10-2008, 23:24   #3
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Rich, your writing and contributions (as I've posted before on this Section) are welcomed and the quality is appreciated.

Could you, perhaps give us a contribution concerning a holiday you've had, or "your best day out, ever" sort of thing?

This invitation from me is extended to any SF Member who would like to give it a try, too ... whatever your age/abilities in writing may be. Write about anything you really enjoyed ...... and it will be appreciated.
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Old 02-10-2008, 06:32   #4
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Rich, I've never listened to any wrestling commentary but I can imagine it from this story. You can hear the excitable sports commentator enjoying the match (bout?).

For the backstage bits, I wonder if it might help to separate this out a bit more from the flow of commentary. Perhaps the commentator could hand over to a colleague conducting interviews behind the scenes. Just an idea .
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Old 07-10-2008, 16:29   #5
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that was hilarious
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