Good morning all
I am currently in the process of writing a novel, a feat which I have been mulling over for some time now and after writing the first few pages around seven times now I think I have finally found the one I like and I would love it if someone could take a look and offer some suggestions or feedback.
The novel itself is a fantasy genre, medieval setting ( I know who could have guessed right?) and will be following the story of one main character and the story's of the side characters behind him.
The link to the first few pages will be below and I would love a little bit of feedback.
Thanks!
http://sheffieldwriters.ath.cx/SFStoryArchive/1339930748.doc
*Edit* Just noticed some missing words for some reason, they will be added in there soon >.< *Edit*