edit: got weirded out at how many people would read it.

if you're interested in reading a budding wannabe poets writing, gimme a PM or something.

:)

I quite like it. Not bad.

thing is not saying your poem is crap or owt mate but when someone comes on tv/internet/radio with a poem they personally wrote after someone died or something, very seldom does anyone say "yea, that was crap".

But I didn't finish reading it put it back up you big girl

nah its not about anyone dying. Its metaphor!