Your comments here please with regards the poem under construction on the thread entitled FORUM POEM :clap:

11 verses so far, and cracking ones at that.

Thanks all for effort.

GREAT STUFF.

I'm impressed. :D

I've not done any poetry since I was about 14 so I think if I have a go it'll not be quite the same calibre as the quality items we've had so far. :)

Great stuff guys n gals.

i havent seen it :mad:

Originally posted by iamanant
i havent seen it :mad:
http://www.sheffieldforum.co.uk/showthread.php?s=&threadid=7880

The poem's great, cheered me up this morning!

6.44pm, Wed 3rd Feb, one day in and 24 verses.

Brill contribution from some brill minds.

Keep 'em coming folk:thumbsup:

9.09pm 3/3/04

27 hours and 31 cracking verses.

Thanks for support

62 verses by this time tomorrow?:thumbsup:

Originally posted by Pauly
I'm impressed. :D

I've not done any poetry since I was about 14 so I think if I have a go it'll not be quite the same calibre as the quality items we've had so far. :)

Great stuff guys n gals.


Go for it Pauly

Variety is the spice of life, and if EVERYONE contributes it should be one hell of a poem with some remarkable ideas and insights:thumbsup:

Come on kiddies, I can't do this on my own.

Three verses added. Hope they're ok. :|

Spot on Pauly

Like I said, open to all

Hope this is you just warming up

Cheers:thumbsup:

Hmm, meaning that things can only get better eh? :lol:

Should the one liner be left in, do you think, for post-erity maybe ?

Nah, I think it should be moved to the 'comment' thread miself. It did say in the beginning that all comments should be in this here thread. :D

I reckon the best contribution so far is the brilliant single verse effort by iamanant.

He didn't quite get the idea about where the rhymes should fall, but as dada poetry goes, it's right up there with Spike Milligan and Vic & Bob,

Well done mate!

Originally posted by mojoworking
I reckon the best contribution so far is the brilliant single verse effort by iamanant.

He didn't quite get the idea about where the rhymes should fall, but as dada poetry goes, it's right up there with Spike Milligan and Vic & Bob,

Well done mate!

Mod - I've removed it as not being in the spirit of the thread plus it was homophobic. Any complaints to Geoff.

Originally posted by Phanerothyme
Should the one liner be left in, do you think, for post-erity maybe ?

Mod - Have removed the post. If the original poster wants to add it back here then do so.

Wow... seems like I've missed a good read with these threads.

Wish I'd have seen em now!

4/3/04 49 verses!!!!!!

Your effort counts as Three verses, cycleracer!!

Sorry, no verses added tonight by me. Too busy arguing on other threads.

Thanks Geoff for editting.

Thanks all for contributions so far

Come on Pauly, let's have some more of your offerings!!:thumbsup:

5/3/04 63 verses now.

Help needed here please!:thumbsup:

5/3/04 11:37pm 70 verses and counting.

There ya go matey. 5 more verses for ya. ;)

Magic Pauly.

Great stuff, and expecting more of same.

Cheers Bard!!!!!!!

6/3/04 3pm 83 :thumbsup:

We goin' for the ton?:wow:

Originally posted by markham
Magic Pauly.

Great stuff, and expecting more of same.

Cheers Bard!!!!!!!

I'll see what I can do next time I'm in a poetic mood. ;)

Thanks SM, that's another 5 brilliant ones which makes 88 as of 8.30pm:banana:

6/3/04 9.50pm 95 :arrow: :help:

You're feckin addicted man!!!

Take 5......and I don't mean verses. ;)

5 coming up.........

10:35 Saturday 6th March 2004

100 verses :wave: :banana: :partyhat: :clap:

Originally posted by mojoworking
I reckon the best contribution so far is the brilliant single verse effort by iamanant.

He didn't quite get the idea about where the rhymes should fall, but as dada poetry goes, it's right up there with Spike Milligan and Vic & Bob,

Well done mate!


thanks mate

Sorry iamanant, didn't get to read it.

Disappeared before I got there.

If it offended, try rewording it and have another go.

Now125 verses:thumbsup:

Thanks MOJO and PHAN for today's offerings:thumbsup:

GOD, MY HEAD HURTS!!!!!!!:confused:

Have just copied poem onto Word and its 12 pages long in size 12 font!!!!!:thumbsup: CHEERS EVERYONE.

i cant remember wot i put soz

Originally posted by markham
Sorry iamanant, didn't get to read it.

Disappeared before I got there.

If it offended, try rewording it and have another go.

Nothing like an unforgettable verse, eh?:thumbsup:

The rules have changed.

See FORUM POEM thread for today for details.

PS
Someone else's turn to count the verses:thumbsup:

Thanks pretty-woman Good stuff, keep it coming (PM'd you)

Thanks theHook great.

Come on everybody:thumbsup:

I'll count verses when my head starts working :P

Removed the following post from the poem thread:
Originally posted by venger
Originally posted by markham
To the tune of 'Hope and Glory'
Here's my first attempt
Hope it don't offend you lot
No offence is meant.



LAND OF DOPE AND WHINGERS
England's industry-free
We are useless at football
But how we really love thee.

Rover went to the Germans
Jaguar sold out to Ford
All the things we were proud of
Bought by someone abroad.

Clowns who sit at elections
Titles that don't mean a thing
Earls, Dukes, Barons and MPs
Come on all of you sing.

Land of dope and whingers
English woman and man
Praise this home of our fathers
While it goes down the pan.


Were you making a point here or a poem?

Please keep comments inside this thread.

Thanks Sidla, you know it makes sense:thumbsup:

As of 2:35pm 13th march it is 173 verses:thumbsup:

Thanks so far to;

Martin_s
venger
Sam Miguel
mojoworking
Abdul
Classic Rock
Sidla
Spangle
Pauly
Phanerothyme
Cycleracer
kittykat
pretty_woman
theHook
iamanant (still curious about this one!)
my mum and dad
my teachers
the producer
William Wordsworth without who's inspiration none of this would have been possible....
and all those members of the public who have made this happen, including...blub,blub gibber......:loopy:

15th March 11pm and 187 verses.

13 to go to 200!!!!!:thumbsup: