https://www.takeonesmallstep.co.uk/Entry/View/580

Obviously it can't be changed on the competition website as it has now been submitted but i will be making a longer version to be used on our own website. I was wondering if people could let me know what they think of the video and give some constructive criticism on how it can be improved?

Natz

Hey Natz,
It is a nice video. Maybe for future ones try putting some music underneath it, and if you can reshoot the opening. You look really nervous in the shoot, and there is no need. Just get a big smile, and give it another go if you can. Some music might help it have more of a drive. Just an idea, but sounds like a good idea!
Cheers

Hi,

Thank you for the reply.

I couldn't add music because of copyright issues but i will definitely be re-shooting the spoken parts sometime in the near future.

Cheers :thumbsup: