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knoxyovs9
10-10-2009, 01:04
im in the middle of updating my website if you want to check it out
its in my signiture

im also becoming more well known in the dog world now and have won numerus of junior handling prizes too
if anyone needs a handler dont hesitate to get in touch

plus i show the catalan sheepdogs (gos de atura) who are currently on the import register so i want to help premote the breed info is also on my website



thanks jessica

Strix
10-10-2009, 01:55
It's shaping up pretty well so far, but I really would spend some time on the written English if I were you ;)

If you copy and paste your text into any word processing package and make sure the spelling and grammar functions are switched on, that should give you a good start :thumbsup:

Lexi
10-10-2009, 04:44
I've PM'd you :)

knoxyovs9
10-10-2009, 09:07
thank you strix

Lotti
10-10-2009, 10:47
Hi Jessica,

Looks fab! Well done.

As a bit of constructive criticism: I'd rethink the title... perhaps 'Jessica Knox - Show Dog Handler' or similar... 'promoting my handling' just seems a little more like a blog than showing others what you can do... if that makes sense? Try to think of something concise, that tells others what you do straight away instead of saying what the website is there to do... you already have that in the first line of your context anyway.

Of course, it's just something that popped into my mind and if you're happy with it as it is there's no need to take my advice! :lol:

knoxyovs9
10-10-2009, 11:09
thanks lotti
thanks for the advice i think im going to change it
x

Strix
12-10-2009, 14:12
Let us know when you've done the alterations won't you? :)