Hi there fellow writers, ive just recently written my first article about the sheffield steelers for an international website called ProHockeyNews.
If anyone could leave me feedback good or bad, that would be appreciated, as i am always looking to improve.
Link: http://www.prohockeynews.com/hockey/publish/hockeyuk/Scott_Antcliffe.shtml
Kind regards

Well scott94, you’ll get no words of wisdom from me, I can see nothing wrong with that, wrote like a true reporter.
Nice one :thumbsup:

thankyou coyleys, i appreciate youre kind words