http://www.communitynet.org.uk/SFStoryArchive/1215870832.doc

This is something I wrote some time ago and I thought I'd make a couple of changes before posting it. I can't claim that it's given it a definite local flavour, but it is a different take on a well known story.

Hi Hopman,

I really like the story -quick and to the point.

I also liked the way you worked the dialogue.

Regards