View Full Version : Finally making an appearance in this group :)


Strix
07-04-2008, 15:07
Well, having rashly shown an interest in a meet, I thought I'd better air some of my previous efforts to the group and see what you guys make of them :(

Don't be gentle - I need some constructive criticism, and some good pointers if I'm going to make the most of taking part in this group ;)

http://s43.photobucket.com/albums/e393/SFStrix/SF%20Walk%208SEP06/things/?albumview=slideshow

and a 360 stitched panoramic:
http://s43.photobucket.com/albums/e393/SFStrix/SF%20Walk%208SEP06/360/?action=view&current=360stitch.jpg

DaFoot
08-04-2008, 08:14
Some promising looking pics there, but I'm struggling to get a pic to sit still / big enough to have a decent look at it :(

jezzyjj
08-04-2008, 14:50
My observation would be that the images seem too centred. Placing the main point of interest in the middle is rarely a good thing.
The simplest compostional thing to consider is the rule of thirds.
http://digital-photography-school.com/blog/rule-of-thirds/
Like all rules, it can be broken, but you have to know it, to break it!

Strix
15-04-2008, 21:59
is this a better format DaFoot?
http://s43.photobucket.com/albums/e393/SFStrix/SF%20Walk%208SEP06/things/?albumview=link

Strix
15-04-2008, 22:05
My observation would be that the images seem too centred. Placing the main point of interest in the middle is rarely a good thing.
The simplest compostional thing to consider is the rule of thirds.
http://digital-photography-school.com/blog/rule-of-thirds/
Like all rules, it can be broken, but you have to know it, to break it!
Oo - that's an interesting link :)

can I ask you to go back and look where my horizons and such elements as dry stone walls appear in many of my shots though? ;)

Grissom
15-04-2008, 22:16
Is it possible to turn the reflection off that is on at the bottom of each photo in the first link you had ? I think that may be affecting the way we see the 'thirds' in the image by extending each photo a bit and shifting the lines to somewhere else in the image, making your eye look in the wrong place perhaps.

There was a great link to the rule of thirds above. Good one here (http://photoinf.com/General/KODAK/guidelines_for_better_photographic_composition_int roduction.html) too that could be worth looking at. Lots of nice photo examples :)

Strix
16-04-2008, 00:44
sorry Grissom - I can't turn that off - it's part of Photobucket's slideshow, but I've provided the link to the gallery page too now - so you can see the pics individually - you're right - that reflection is rather annoying :suspect:

Strix
16-04-2008, 00:59
That's a handy link - thank you :)

Framing is what I was experimenting with in a couple of those pictures - but it was my first attempt, and I'm not convinced it was completely successful - though I do like how the gate came out framed by the tree to the right