Hi this is the first time I've ever shown any writing so I'm nervous!

It's kind of with the theme of love at first sight, but poems rather than a story.

Any comments good or bad welcome! thanks

Love at first sight poems. (http://sheffieldwriters.ath.cx/SFStoryArchive/1187561825.doc)

Saff ,poetries one of those areas were you can either write it or you can't, personally i think its harder to write a poem than it is to write a story ,you obviously have a passion for writing poetry and it shows well done .

Absolutely lovely and so very true :)

Very mature. Excellent. Give us more.

Very nice indeed, I love your style.....