The Writers Group theme for April is “The Letter” – just after I posted this on the writer’s notice board I opened my E-mail and found the first submission from Redrobbo! Now that’s fast!
The Letter. (http://sheffieldwriters.ath.cx/SFStoryArchive/1175466173.doc) By Redrobbo.
A lovely piece of writing, redrobbo. Again, I'm impressed with the flow within the piece. :)
Thats lovely, and Im guessing it comes from the heart. :)
A sad story Red
All those cold nights in your bed, if I had known I could have helped you out there with a nice pair of thermal long johns, and because youíre a fellow writer I would have done them at a good rate.
I know what youíre saying, ďIím all heartĒ but Iím a sucker for a hard luck story.
PS, I take paypal
Well crafted with a touch of bitterness and finally recognising there's no going back.
A touching piece of writing, full of emotion and also at the same time, it conveys a kind of flatness. Gave me goosebumps.
lovely and heartbreaking Red. x
that's really brilliant :)
Brilliant piece of work! Read very well and flowed. Not too long either, yeah brillo!:thumbsup:
I agree with all that's gone before. And I love the way it comes to such a clever conclusion. Really good :thumbsup: