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Mantaspook
01-04-2007, 22:38
The Writers Group theme for April is “The Letter” – just after I posted this on the writer’s notice board I opened my E-mail and found the first submission from Redrobbo! Now that’s fast!

The Letter. (http://sheffieldwriters.ath.cx/SFStoryArchive/1175466173.doc) By Redrobbo.

shoeshine
02-04-2007, 17:59
A lovely piece of writing, redrobbo. Again, I'm impressed with the flow within the piece. :)

pattricia
02-04-2007, 19:56
Thats lovely, and Im guessing it comes from the heart. :)

coyleys
02-04-2007, 23:44
A sad story Red
All those cold nights in your bed, if I had known I could have helped you out there with a nice pair of thermal long johns, and because you’re a fellow writer I would have done them at a good rate.
I know what you’re saying, “I’m all heart” but I’m a sucker for a hard luck story.
PS, I take paypal

Hopman
03-04-2007, 09:24
Well crafted with a touch of bitterness and finally recognising there's no going back.

kel83
03-04-2007, 17:31
A touching piece of writing, full of emotion and also at the same time, it conveys a kind of flatness. Gave me goosebumps.

fox20thc
04-04-2007, 11:14
lovely and heartbreaking Red. x

elora*
04-04-2007, 11:27
that's really brilliant :)

brisbane
04-04-2007, 18:57
Brilliant piece of work! Read very well and flowed. Not too long either, yeah brillo!:thumbsup:

sauerkraut
15-04-2007, 10:25
I agree with all that's gone before. And I love the way it comes to such a clever conclusion. Really good :thumbsup: