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coyleys
11-03-2007, 22:41
I have nearly finished my story on “Childhood Memories, up t’no good” and will probably post it next week, in the interim I’ll let you have a read of a bit of my family bible, some of you may have already read this piece.:cry:

Childhood memories. (http://sheffieldwriters.ath.cx/SFStoryArchive/1173655762.doc)

shoeshine
12-03-2007, 12:26
A very sad story and poignant too, coyleys.

You use the "northern" accents well, and describe the prevailing attitudes of the period within family life in a very accurate way.

I don't think I have the gene, I became quite emotional as I read your contribution to this month's theme.

pattricia
12-03-2007, 13:22
I think this is the best you have done Mick.Very, very sad. Yes I know all about the Coyle gene. ;)

Falls
12-03-2007, 13:57
Hi,

A very good, but sad, story.

I also had been down the same road. The one night I didn't go to the hospital in a month (my Aunt, her sister, went instead) was the night she passed away.

Regards

Mantaspook
15-03-2007, 20:31
Hi Coyleys,

A very sad story, told in a beautifully poignant manner and I totally agree with Shoeshine & Pattricia’s comments above.

brisbane
17-03-2007, 16:44
I very moving piece of work, thank you for sharing it with us. I enjoyed reading it and totally agree with the others and their comments. One of your best pieces yet. Pulls on the heartstrings. :) :)