I thought this might fit the February theme and as well, it's a love story for St Valentine's Day.
The Goddess. (http://sheffieldwriters.ath.cx/SFStoryArchive/1170176266.doc)
Mantaspook
30-01-2007, 19:02
That story brought a tear to my eye, reminded me of a young lady I once went out with. She went like a train…Der DuRR! :D
shoeshine
31-01-2007, 11:13
You had me "steaming" for a moment there, Hopman.
I'm in :love: with that lady too!
Another good one Hopman.
I actually saw her last August, as stunning as ever, she may be getting on a bit but she still pulls the crowds.
I think the wife got a bit jealous when I started to drool over her.
Keep em coming Hopman.
pattricia
31-01-2007, 20:40
Very good Hopman.Keeps the interest of the reader right to the end.Are you a train enthusiast yourself ?
What do you think? Does it give that impression?
sauerkraut
01-02-2007, 09:55
Rotten lot: I should have read the story first. The comments give the game away!
pattricia
01-02-2007, 15:20
What do you think? Does it give that impression?
Certainly does Hopman !!!:hihi:
What do you think? Does it give that impression?
I’m a bit of an enthusiast, but you got me up to the end, the wonderful world of innuendos.
Nice one Hopman.
Being brought up around trains, I loved your story! And it brings back the memories of seeing the Mallard and Flying Scotsman in action! Great stuff.