mikomi
28-01-2007, 21:27
This is only a draft ,but i would like to know if it makes sense at all .
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View Full Version : Story: 'Chess 2' mikomi 28-01-2007, 21:27 This is only a draft ,but i would like to know if it makes sense at all . [b][i][size=+2][url=http://"LINK DELETED BY AUTHOR.") scribe 01-02-2007, 19:17 Mikomi . I suspect this is going to spring a surprise or two . I'm lost with the chess bit but i never understood the game anyway ,but for those that do they''l be playing it out bit by bit and no-doubt waiting for the next installment. coyleys 02-02-2007, 00:32 Yep! it makes sense, keep em coming.:thumbsup: Hopman 02-02-2007, 08:58 One criticism regarding the squares: iy would be a4 not 4a. pattricia 02-02-2007, 20:46 This is a clever piece of writing. mikomi 02-02-2007, 21:10 One criticism regarding the squares: iy would be a4 not 4a. I just knew sooner or later someone in this group would have a good knowledge of chess thanks Hopman :D . Like scribe i don't have a clue about the game .As I'm plotting the story i am also reading a book on chess trying to fathom it all out and put it into place, so to all of you out there who know about the game please bear with me a feel free to correct any error i may make . pattricia 02-02-2007, 21:13 I just knew sooner or later someone in this group would have a good knowledge of chess thanks Hopman :D . Like scribe i don't have a clue about the game .As I'm plotting the story i am also reading a book on chess trying to fathom it all out and put it into place, so to all of you out there who know about the game please bear with me a feel free to correct any error i may make . Just shows that hes read your story very carefully,mikomi !! ;) |