brisbane
14-01-2007, 16:00
A short tale to be told. (http://sheffieldwriters.ath.cx/SFStoryArchive/1168796859.doc)
My first offering of 2007, hope you enjoy.
My first offering of 2007, hope you enjoy.
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View Full Version : Story: 'A short tale to be told.' brisbane 14-01-2007, 16:00 A short tale to be told. (http://sheffieldwriters.ath.cx/SFStoryArchive/1168796859.doc) My first offering of 2007, hope you enjoy. shoeshine 14-01-2007, 16:23 You wicked, wicked writer you! :hihi: :hihi: :hihi: Loved it! :thumbsup: brisbane 14-01-2007, 16:43 Thank you, you have made me blush. :blush: I thought it might be a bit too short, but glad you liked it!!:) Mantaspook 14-01-2007, 18:47 A short and sweet story Brisbane. The main characters seemed very rounded but were a bit too alike, if there were a little more variety I’m sure the story would be a revel..ation. Good stuff. :thumbsup: brisbane 14-01-2007, 20:10 :hihi: :hihi: :hihi: Revels were never the same when they took the peanuts out.:mad: pattricia 14-01-2007, 20:17 Brisbane, thats a lovely story.Short & sweet. ! :thumbsup: coyleys 14-01-2007, 20:51 Nice one.:thumbsup: brisbane 14-01-2007, 21:16 Thanks everyone! It was based on a true story and I have the empty box to prove it!:hihi: :hihi: |