Story: 'The Friend.'

Be kind, its my first effort.

The Friend.

I can't read it as i need a password?? do i have to join the group??

I can't read it as i need a password?? do i have to join the group??

Yup, pm shoeshine.

Bloody hell that was a spooky one. Loved it, and although it took a while to get you to write something it was well worth the wait!

Lets have more like that.

Now that was indeed spooky and I am just nipping downstairs to make sure the cellar door is locked…

I’m curious, what year did you set the story in? Mid sixties? – I’m guessing because of the “streets in the sky” comment and the TV programme.

I love that kind of story Foxy.Well done !

Ta Jabs, apology for the mis spelling and omission of a word, oh and the fact I changed the name of a principle character at the end (type o) but I like to write by hand first.

Now that was indeed spooky and I am just nipping downstairs to make sure the cellar door is locked…

 

I’m curious, what year did you set the story in? Mid sixties? – I’m guessing because of the “streets in the sky” comment and the TV programme.

late 60's Manta. Just before Kelvin was born.

May I say dear friends, that your praise in triplicate has given me a boost in confidence to put pen to parchment again Lets just hope I can transcribe the bugger to the PC properly

Thanks guys.

That was really good, Fox.

Your first effort in the club but I suspect not the first story you’ve ever wrote “to good for that” we have some serious competition here.

It reminded me of the stories I’d read as a teenager, anything that was spooky.

And I have to admit it sent the old shiver down the back.

Keep up the good work.

:thumbsup:

Greatly enjoyed reading this, but over my shoulder I can see the trapdoor leading to the cellar and it's a bit near. It's stopped moving.

Thank you hopman