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threecolours
03-12-2006, 22:02
'Him.' (http://sheffieldwriters.ath.cx/SFStoryArchive/1165186084.rtf)

A few people on here know who I am so I'd better say please don't assume the things I write are true.

Im in a good mood so I'm going to share a couple of things which are actually a bit depressing...

First one is called 'Him'.

Praise, criticism, fear and loathing...all comments welcome!

pattricia
03-12-2006, 22:09
Quite a sad,wintery story.Youve soon learnt to upload.It took me ages.Good Luck, and welcome once more to the Writers Group.

brisbane
15-12-2006, 16:39
I liked it threecolours, it did have a sadness about it but at the same time I wanted to read more. I started to imagine all sorts of what it was about......waiting for the next installment :)

chloelouise
17-12-2006, 23:42
Hi

I-liked-it-too.

Are-you-going-to-write-more-about-it?

Sometimes-I-write-kind-of-intros-similar-to-this-then-leave-them-to-themselves.

Apologies-for-the-typing.........my-space-bar-has-broken-on-my-laptop!

Chloe