Any Ladies on Sheffield Forum who would mind giving me some feedback on a charity ladies evening I'm organising?

Please could you take a look at the following page on the website, which gives all the details:

http://www.wowsheffield.co.uk/nov06.htm

...and let me know if you think there is anything else we should be doing to make the evening more enjoyable and to raise more money for the charity.

Thanks, your help is very much appreciated

Looks a good night! Just two minor comments
1 its quite hard to find what the price is for the tickets
2 to make more enjoyable I'd like a band playing or something like that, but thats my personal preference!
jo

Looks a good night! Just two minor comments
1 its quite hard to find what the price is for the tickets
2 to make more enjoyable I'd like a band playing or something like that, but thats my personal preference!
jo

i agree with jo about finding the price of the tickets .... but £12 is a bargain for what you can get on the night (presuming the treats available are for you to try free of charge?)
id advertise it as ''all this for just £12!!''
:)
great, if i can find a couple of female freinds who are interested we will be buying tickets ... :D

Make the home page a little more "pleasing on the eye".

If possible centre and change the colour of the headline with the venue.

The lists of treats on offer, bullet point them to make them stand out and emphasise just how many treat there are on offer!!!

Sounds absolutely great. Well done.

I don't mean the home page, I mean the link to the event you are holding.

Also put the price on that page in BIG BOLD LETTERS. £12.00 is a bargain, perhaps put next to the price what the money specifically goes towards e.g.

£12.00 per ticket with all funds going to the Well Woman Research Fund

Love the way of advertising it further smart thinking I looked at this with a friend who`s asking her mates

Why not provide each person with a glass of wine on arrival - wine can be bought pretty cheaply and it gets people in the spirirt of things and more likely to donate and spend more!

Looks a good night! Just two minor comments
1 its quite hard to find what the price is for the tickets
2 to make more enjoyable I'd like a band playing or something like that, but thats my personal preference!
jo

"Join us for a fun evening of relaxation and Christmas Shopping.


All for just £12.00 per ticket!!

All proceeds go to WellBeing of Women"

Looks like good value for money to me!

Why not provide each person with a glass of wine on arrival - wine can be bought pretty cheaply and it gets people in the spirirt of things and more likely to donate and spend more!

Thanks, but we provide everyone with a kir royal champagne on arrival. I must have forgotten to put this in...

Will go and have a look

Nope, I had put it on there. It obviously wasn't that clear so I've had a fiddle with it.

Thanks