Hope this gets downloaded.

Priscilla the pot bellied pig. (http://sheffieldwriters.ath.cx/SFStoryArchive/1160222007.rtf)

Nice little story . Your confidence is growing i can tell , more importantly you made the effort to write something .:)

Yeah.
Nice one. Mikomi is right, your confidence is growing and its leading to even better little stories.
Loved it.

Nice happy little story, and there i was thinking the worse that Priscilla would finish up a pork chop.:hihi:

Nice happy little story, and there i was thinking the worse that Priscilla would finish up a pork chop.:hihi:
Thanks everyone.This little pig didnt go to market.!!!

Yeah, I enjoyed that one Pattricia. Nice upbeat little story :)

Yeah, I enjoyed that one Pattricia. Nice upbeat little story :)
Thanks, I appreciate it from you a lot.:thumbsup:

A nice story, the characters could do with just a little more development (Why is Zita such a pig? Is she Meatloaf’s Ex? ) but when you introduced Meatloaf & “A walk on the wild side” I thought it was going to turn into a musical number! Rather disappointed it didn’t actually…

Liked it, well done! :thumbsup:

A nice story, the characters could do with just a little more development (Why is Zita such a pig? Is she Meatloaf’s Ex? ) but when you introduced Meatloaf & “A walk on the wild side” I thought it was going to turn into a musical number! Rather disappointed it didn’t actually…

Liked it, well done! :thumbsup:
Yes, Ive noted all your points. I feel quite uncomfortable with fiction,and am glad when its finished. I really enjoy letting the animals talk Walt Disney fashion.No I did wonder about turning it into more of the song"Take a Walk On the Wildside" but Id rememberd Gypsy Hack(I think) telling you that you wouldnt be able to use Elton Johns song in that story of yours,if it was ever published.Not as though mine will, but you never know.The SF may print a book of short stories one day.