Sorry it's long , i got carried away again.

The Carpet Monsters (A new beginning) (http://sheffieldwriters.ath.cx/SFStoryArchive/1159200219.doc)

I am sure we can manage to read more than two pages in succession mikomi. :hihi:

Especially on this Group! :thumbsup:

Nice idea, some good little touches like the carpet mites being fed to the millibugs. I could see it working with more segregated scenes, concentrating on the two main characters but also on the rest of the monsters as they feel out their surroundings. Interesting mind you got there :)

mikomi.......I loved it!

Your imagination is quite staggering. :thumbsup: