GothicCharm
17-09-2006, 02:00 PM
Darkness
A stranger's grip around my throat
Holding myself as still as I can
A stranger's weight upon my chest
Holding my breath
This stranger awaits my movement
This stranger watches me sleep
This stranger's eyes upon me
This stranger makes me feel weak
A stranger's breath upon my neck
The hairs prick up
A stranger's touch upon my skin
Something crawling deep within
This stranger is called darkness
This stranger hates the light
This stranger may not harm me
But this stranger is called night
mikomi
17-09-2006, 07:05 PM
There's more of this ,tell me there is .
GothicCharm
17-09-2006, 08:27 PM
explain what you mean and I'll tell you lol.
Jabberwocky
17-09-2006, 08:40 PM
Very dark, very Numanoid.
Brilliant.
shoeshine
17-09-2006, 08:48 PM
Nicely composed... a bit scary really......
I'm sleeping with the light on tonight Gothic Charm. :)
scribe
17-09-2006, 08:55 PM
explain what you mean and I'll tell you lol.
All i can say is , i want to be darkness:hihi:
scribe
17-09-2006, 08:56 PM
All i can say is , i want to be darkness:hihi:
Sorry i don't know if I'm allowed on here, but it was very nice piece of poetry
Lotti
17-09-2006, 10:08 PM
All i can say is , i want to be darkness:hihi:
:lol: :lol:
It's funny you should say that because I was just thinking how, although scary and dark, it is almost sexual.
shoeshine
17-09-2006, 10:23 PM
Sorry i don't know if I'm allowed on here, but it was very nice piece of poetryOf course you are allowed on here scribe! :)
It's the "Open" Section of the Writing Group where all general SF Members can contribute if they wish to do so. :)
GothicCharm
17-09-2006, 10:58 PM
:lol: :lol:
It's funny you should say that because I was just thinking how, although scary and dark, it is almost sexual.
hehe well that's just me all over isn't it :P
GothicCharm
17-09-2006, 11:03 PM
thanks everyone for your contributions.
Lotti
18-09-2006, 12:58 AM
hehe well that's just me all over isn't it :P
You flatter yourself dear! :lol:
Yes, Bex, you are dark and sexy. There - I said it :rolleyes:
:lol:
GothicCharm
18-09-2006, 01:06 AM
haha! :P
im a dark and sexy gothic girly that's why. ok i'll stop being big headed :rolleyes: