View Full Version : I'm going to post something, be nice.


GothicCharm
16-09-2006, 19:16
I'm going to warn you, it's a bit crap.

Heartbeat

I lay in the dark
Staring up to the roof
I hear the steady beat
Of my heart, all alone.

I'm safe when I'm with him
Curled up in his arms
Listening to his heartbeat
Rejoice for the stars.

But now I'm alone
Curled up in a ball
Hearing my own heartbeat
Alone through it all.

He'll be in my nightmares
He'll be in my dreams
He'll be in my heartbeat
He'll hear all my screams

Protecting me from evil
I love him so much
You may ask me why, or how do I know
But the reason is in this poem
Craving his gentle touch.

pattricia
16-09-2006, 20:57
I think the quality is superb.I could never write poetry.Its lovely.Well done.

mikomi
16-09-2006, 20:59
So where is it? .The crap bit i mean, it's a lovely piece of work .

Jabberwocky
16-09-2006, 21:24
Nothing wrong with that at all.
Its making me revise my opinions on lyrics and poetry is this.

GothicCharm
16-09-2006, 21:51
thanks everyone :)

shoeshine
16-09-2006, 22:19
I've already PM'd you with info GC :thumbsup: