brisbane
09-08-2006, 18:17
The bear with no name. (http://sheffieldwriters.ath.cx/SFStoryArchive/1155147450.doc)
Any feedback welcome.
Many thanks.
Any feedback welcome.
Many thanks.
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View Full Version : Story: 'The bear with no name.' brisbane 09-08-2006, 18:17 The bear with no name. (http://sheffieldwriters.ath.cx/SFStoryArchive/1155147450.doc) Any feedback welcome. Many thanks. Jabberwocky 09-08-2006, 18:26 Very nice! That would look great with illustrations. Im going to read it to my little girl later on. brisbane 09-08-2006, 20:06 Many thanks! Treacle is still loved to this day and not been discarded into the box of toys....well for now anyway. Jabberwocky 09-08-2006, 20:09 First rule of writing is "Write about what you know" and you did a brilliant job there. Put your self into it and I bet you could write a whole series of stories about that bear. brisbane 09-08-2006, 20:14 I must admit I do find it more difficult to write about something totally made up so keeping with what I know at the moment and then I'll tip my toe into the unknown. :) pattricia 09-08-2006, 21:23 I must admit I do find it more difficult to write about something totally made up so keeping with what I know at the moment and then I'll tip my toe into the unknown. :) How sweet, youve found the gift to write a story for young children. brisbane 09-08-2006, 22:06 Thank you for the kind words Pattrica. Luckily for that story I had my friend's little girl for inspiration and her pestering for a go to win a bear. |