The bear with no name. (http://sheffieldwriters.ath.cx/SFStoryArchive/1155147450.doc)

Any feedback welcome.

Many thanks.

Very nice! That would look great with illustrations.
Im going to read it to my little girl later on.

Many thanks! Treacle is still loved to this day and not been discarded into the box of toys....well for now anyway.

First rule of writing is "Write about what you know" and you did a brilliant job there. Put your self into it and I bet you could write a whole series of stories about that bear.

I must admit I do find it more difficult to write about something totally made up so keeping with what I know at the moment and then I'll tip my toe into the unknown.
:)

I must admit I do find it more difficult to write about something totally made up so keeping with what I know at the moment and then I'll tip my toe into the unknown.
:)
How sweet, youve found the gift to write a story for young children.

Thank you for the kind words Pattrica. Luckily for that story I had my friend's little girl for inspiration and her pestering for a go to win a bear.