View Full Version : Story: 'The bear with no name.'


brisbane
09-08-2006, 08:17 PM
The bear with no name. (http://sheffieldwriters.ath.cx/SFStoryArchive/1155147450.doc)

Any feedback welcome.

Many thanks.

Jabberwocky
09-08-2006, 08:26 PM
Very nice! That would look great with illustrations.
Im going to read it to my little girl later on.

brisbane
09-08-2006, 10:06 PM
Many thanks! Treacle is still loved to this day and not been discarded into the box of toys....well for now anyway.

Jabberwocky
09-08-2006, 10:09 PM
First rule of writing is "Write about what you know" and you did a brilliant job there. Put your self into it and I bet you could write a whole series of stories about that bear.

brisbane
09-08-2006, 10:14 PM
I must admit I do find it more difficult to write about something totally made up so keeping with what I know at the moment and then I'll tip my toe into the unknown.
:)

pattricia
09-08-2006, 11:23 PM
I must admit I do find it more difficult to write about something totally made up so keeping with what I know at the moment and then I'll tip my toe into the unknown.
:)
How sweet, youve found the gift to write a story for young children.

brisbane
10-08-2006, 12:06 AM
Thank you for the kind words Pattrica. Luckily for that story I had my friend's little girl for inspiration and her pestering for a go to win a bear.