caz_ol
01-08-2006, 03:05 PM
A short lunch time story....
please be gentle!!
Trum-la-lum-la-da. (http://sheffieldwriters.ath.cx/SFStoryArchive/1154437603.doc)
Annoni_mouse
01-08-2006, 09:51 PM
Well I liked it:)
Goes to show what can be achieved with such a small number of words. I think despite the length of the piece you managed to convey a sense of frustration pretty well:thumbsup:
pattricia
02-08-2006, 12:08 AM
Im working my way through everyones story,(as it took me so long to learn how to post my own) and its very good.Lighthearted, and amusing.
shoeshine
02-08-2006, 12:25 AM
Lunchtime musings caught perfectly.
Dreams of things maybe to come, things not quite how one expected them to be.......
I like it too, caz_ol..........you caught the short daydream beautifully, and the length was perfect.
caz_ol
04-08-2006, 11:20 AM
thank you!
I wasn't quite sure what I was going to write, but it just seemed to land on the page!
Glad you liked it :-)
Caz.