A short lunch time story....
please be gentle!!
Well I liked it:)
Goes to show what can be achieved with such a small number of words. I think despite the length of the piece you managed to convey a sense of frustration pretty well:thumbsup:
Im working my way through everyones story,(as it took me so long to learn how to post my own) and its very good.Lighthearted, and amusing.
Lunchtime musings caught perfectly.
Dreams of things maybe to come, things not quite how one expected them to be.......
I like it too, caz_ol..........you caught the short daydream beautifully, and the length was perfect.
I wasn't quite sure what I was going to write, but it just seemed to land on the page!
Glad you liked it :-)